Lost in a reality
Where everything is as it seems
Where everything is everyone and noone fights for greed
Noone fights for love or hate
Noone fights for lust
Noone needs anything but the sound of my six string
She is beautiful
She is everything to me
But now she is gone
And i couldnt do a thing
Now she is gone forever
And i couldnt care less
I thought I found something special
But all i found was lust and death
All that died inside was a naive boy
A boy who thought that truth and love
Could really conquer all
But all love and truth does is set you up for disaster
A meniacal, crazy, ugly thing that eats away that your soul
Author notes
well....this is what happens when i doze off in english.=]
some parts have some meaning to me but most of it is just random stuff i wrote down.
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very nice.. no forced rhyme or anything.. which is usually what i have lol nice write you have ^_^
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wow
okay firstly this is awesome, your lines were smooth and your words made a whole lotta sense. secondly, you write better poetry than i do when i doze off in english class. keep writing, BRAVO!
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it's pretty good. lol. but just to let you know, i am pretty sure that your "noone" is actually two words... ("no one") lol. just fer future references.
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