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beautiful angel

a beautiful angel
sitting by me
not knowing anything
cause she so small
shes to young to know
whats goin on in the world
thank god she doesnt
cause theres so much goin on
im glad
that i have
this beautiful angel
sitting by me
for me to watch over her
and protect her
from the world outside

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  • Gibson0918
    September 10, 2008

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    Yes, I wish i were small again so I could forget all the struggles of the world. This poem feels like its peeling the surface of what its talking about, I hope you take that as a compliment.


  • The Drifter
    September 10, 2008
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    Some one to watch over--that says it all.
    Very good.
    bw