I am Maiden
I am Warrior
There are two
sides to me
I am soft
to the touch
I fight
to the death
I am your lover
in the night
I fight beside you
to make everything right
I am Maiden
I am Warrior
There are two
sides to me
~Lady Raven~
Author notes
What I see in this picture.
Written January 20th, 2004
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What else can I say that others have already.
Keep up the great writes.
Stacey
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This is a great write. This is brilliant and the interpretation was fantastic. I liked the length too, it was easier to read and thought it was successful.
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Wow, i like this a lot. It's a great pic and i love your interpretation of it. I have to say i would have liked it if it was longer, i think a lot more could be said about her, but this is a well written piece and i like it a lot.
Meg. -
Enchantress and crusader is the view I behold. Loved the description of the pic, these two ladies are looking definately capable of subdueing whatever should come thier way. I am still thinking over NaughtyGrlRed's comment, what a show that would be if only a candle or brazier was lit within the folds of that tent! Lovely and very thought prevoking write vampira 1665.
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I think your poem describes the very essence of womanhood. We all in our own way are fighters. and yet we maintain to keep that softness of our very femnity intact. It is a great balancing act that most of us have perfected. I would call this poem a celebration of womanhood. Loved the picture too. very apt, great find.
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i liked the plurality of this. your lucky you have the two sides to keep you balanced. me? i only have one side, and its on training wheels at that.
nicely done.
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Hmm. I like this. Its really interesting that you could find a picture that shows the two sides of yourself. Great poem.
Nikihayami -
I like your poem. its shows your two sides and who u want to be. Nice write!
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nice poem. i like the description. a little short for me, but overall decent.
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Dude. I totally know what it's like to have a split-personality. Warrior-Maiden... is there anything better to be? It's the best of both worlds.
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Vampira1665~
Wow...this was great...
One looks like "Damsel in distress" and the other one looks like a warrior...But it seems like the "damsel in distress" has an alter ego, like when she's at home... She's this mindless, helpless woman. But when she's out...It's like she's a whole new girl in control...Well done.
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Thank you nike for your comment. What you wrote was very well said and is what I was trying to get across. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Lady Raven
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I really enjoyed this. It is short but to the point. A powerful woman can stroke your neck or slit it just as you deserve. What I see in the picture is a woman who would fight for her man and the other woman would fight for her King.
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The shortness gets to me, but other than that it's interesting to read through.
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Holy shit!!!! I don't know about the vegy but damn that sounded hot. Awesome thought there my dear! Kisses, Lady Raven
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those two girls are done with men
they seek confort and love from each other
after the sun goes down
they make their way
to some tent
strip down
playing with each other
kissing
pulling hair
finger f*ucking
they break out the cucumbers
cuz they didn't
have vibro's back then
they make wild passionate love all night
with hidden carnal animal knowledge
naughty -
Ohhhh do tell. I can't wait.
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great write
you wanna know what i see?
it's naughty -
good
This brings up thoughts of Eleanor of Aquataine. She wanted her knights to be gentlemen as well as fighters. (Picture if you will NFL football players performing poetry and singing.) Not an easy job but she managed being the strong leader she was.
Beautiful poem that should remind us that there are two sides to each coin.
John -
Thank you and I plan on writing many more. I love to write what I see in a picture. Hugs and bites, Lady Raven
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I can relate even though I am a guy. I am a warrior because all I do is fighting but I still have a nicer side to me. But sometimes it's hard living two lives. I always wanted to write a poem like this. This is great. -Richie
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