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Toilet Worm

There is a worm in the toilet
it wiggles with glee
surrounded by an ocean

the land mass stinks
a floating island of rot
is a refuge for this creature

I am cold. He is warm
and cozy. My leg hairs bristle
to the sound of waves

crashing against the bulwark
failing, eroding
the worm is corroding.

My life is a worm.
I wiggle in stench gleefully
willfully in my freedom's bondage

Bondage - a funny word
to choke on - eat the dung
instead, but do so with care.

I am a thousand worms
lost on a brown island
spiraling down to a river

'Row Row Row your boat
gently down the stream'
the children sing to my angst.

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  • turtletacular
    September 14, 2008
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    LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • echo-ink
    September 10, 2008

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    Yay for worms in toilets, just flush, my dear.
    I liked this, and yeah, children singing to your angst....great line, and ain't it the truth.
    Thanks for entering.
    Bell