As I walk up and down these cold streets, I feel death by my side
As the blood in my veins run cold, death is almost near
As my limbs become weak, death has started its course
As I taste the blood on my tounge, death is creeping up on me
As I lose my train of thought, death is just on the other side
As my blood shot eyes come to a rest, death is now inside my blood
As my head hits the curb, death has completely taken its course
Now the only thing left, is to accept deaths decision
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SirThug
A contest entry
- Darkness and Love, Demons above by AbandonedAngel.
350 points, ended September 19, 2008, 32 entries
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I love it
This is insanely good. I like the last part Now thhe only thing left, is to accept the deaths decision, thats awesome. I have never felt this way before but my freshman year of highschool I got really really depressed and want to die. How do you come up with stuff like this to write. For me it would be so hard kinda you should read my poems and tell me what you think. This is an all around great write.
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