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choking on air.

fading into air
I begin to breathe you in,
you're my addiction.

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  • letters to no one
    January 9

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    Love love love the last line

    it's just the best ending for this piece

    Shelly
    xxx


  • aanika
    September 15, 2008

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    oooooh pretty.
    I love the idea of you choking on his lies/deception/whateverrr.
    you actually write better when you're not in love.
    <3


    • etoile
      September 15, 2008
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      lol its a haiku.. theyre easier to write when im not depressed/in love.
      but normal poems i cant write


  • sheltered
    September 14, 2008
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    On top of old smoky...

  • She Stole My Voice
    September 11, 2008
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    Cute.
    I like :]
    ♥


    -Mary


  • SatuRn Grotesk
    September 10, 2008
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    ::thinks of Twilight:: Yes, I quite agree with this.... Good Haiku

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