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Salty blood

The CIA Took My baby away
this shits fucked up and were not ok

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  • blind ecye dog
    October 17, 2008
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    Ah now there is the opening to a hard rock anthem.
    Very interesting in a snapshot way. RED


  • Evolet
    September 10, 2008
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    wow
    very to the point
    so much emotion put into only two sentences

  • imoutyo
    September 10, 2008
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    that really caught my eye. about as direct and intense as two lines can be