I see you crying, please
Don't hurt, don't forget me
Don't try to hide those tears
I swear I'll kill those fears
Oh, my sweet
Don't tell me you don't know
Just how far this torment goes
Your hate, my grand beginnings
Your fate, my patience thinning
I don't think you know my name
But what should I care
I'll fight each murderer, stalking
I'll kill each fucker, haunting
Alone
You are
My purpose
Without
You I
Am worthless
I'll die
Fighting
For you
Don't cry
When I
Leave you
You see me dying, dear
You're crying, don't you fear
I'm fine knowing you're alright
I'm fine knowing you're alive
Just forget about me
Author notes
So... I read a bit about song structure and tried to do something with it. Its supposed to be Metal, I guess, but I've already forgotten the tune that was in my head.
Loneliness is bliss, ignorance is sweet, and fail tastes like melon.
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I like this one it has alot of feeling and even though I dont hear the music I can feel it as I read it great job
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That's pretty good. But you put "patient's" and I believe it should be "patience".
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