black white or hairless
some tall fat thin big or small ~
our enjoyment
those fickle felines
give us love furry or not ~
all are bred to please
so much fun sometimes ~
cats playful or so sleepy
our friends for life
Author notes
Author's Notes: This is my new poem entry for the contest: Make me laugh, k?
This poem is supposed to be three silly / funny Haiku in a "string!" Hope the judges enjoy Haiku -- if not just go ahead and DQ me!
A contest entry
- Make me laugh, k? by Riamh.
475 points, ended September 20, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is funny about cats to you?
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Bandits United!
Nice Haiku String. Cats are darling creatures aren't they? 
Just as you say, no matter what type, size or temperament they are friends for life! I think you manages nicely to keep to the Trad. 5/7/5 [almost 
] Fun read. 
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Bandits United!
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Charming. Great flow and imagery. I could feel the cats leap off the page. You will do well with this. Return the favor?
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Wonderful Poem
Hello, I love to read haiku. You have written three great ones for the picture prompt. Nice imagery and brought a smile this morning. Best of luck. You take care.
Sandy
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I congratulate you on your haiku skill, something I could never understand or master. Best of luck.
Slayer -
Wonderfully done connecting all three haiku's with similar themes! Creative and adventerous! Good luck in the contest. ~Sie
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