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SayThat Again I Didn't Hear You

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Beauty in the eye of beholder,
at least that's what is said.
Opposites attract like magnets,
thats why are masters wed.

We may look like quite the pair,
and together we do not belong.
They think we're best of friends,
oh they couldn't be more wrong.

We may share a home together,
but the first chance that I get.
This furball will become history,
and her nine lives you can bet.

Oh no the masters just told us,
neither will be staying around.
Because we won't get along,
we are both off to the pound!!


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  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 19, 2008
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    This is cute

    Try having a cockitiel a bobtail cat a dog and a chiuaua what a riot

  • Brian Balzer
    September 12, 2008

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    Very Cute

    At first I thought it was going to explain why they should be together even though the were so different. I like the rhythm and rhyme, my type of poem. I love the way the story unfolds. The ending was the best.

  • mcheadle
    September 10, 2008
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    This I dare say is

    The cat's Meow,meow,meow,meow...mac


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 11, 2008
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      Good morning MAC . I must say your comment brings a smile. It was Purrrfect. Take care. Hugs and Smiles. Hope you have a wonderful day. Sandy


  • Riamh
    September 10, 2008

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    awww poor kitties!
    Great entry! Best of luck.

    Slayer

    • Sandygram silver member
      September 11, 2008
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      Thank you, I appreciate the nice commmment. Take care. Sandy


  • poetrandy
    September 10, 2008
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    OOPS!

    Here's you applause!


  • poetrandy
    September 10, 2008
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    Funnny!

    Great little rhymed poem! Love it! Good luck in the contest!
    Oops, forgot the points, sorry!


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 11, 2008
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      Great Comment

      Thank you for dropping by and reading.I apreciate the nice comment. You take care. Sandy


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 10, 2008

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    Excellent

    A coool write, indeed. Brought a smile to my face. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one.


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 11, 2008
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      Good Morning

      Your comment was very nice and a pleasure to read this morning. I appreciate you always stopping by. Take care. Sandy


  • Nature Song silver member
    September 10, 2008

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    lol, this was funny I have to admitt! Off to the pound they go. Opposites attract...little did they know. ~Sie Good luck in this contest my friend.


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 11, 2008
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      Thank You Sie

      I enjoy reading your nice comments. Thank you for stopping by. It is always appreciated. Take care. Sandy

  • chiefmac
    September 10, 2008

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    Well my friend I do know you have given me a laugh. The poem is grand to take the reader through a wonderful relationship of the two, unable to get along so off they go to the pound.-smile- This is a winner for me.


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 11, 2008
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      Good Morning Dan

      Well I am so glad this one brought you a smile. You bring many to me so it is nice to reciprocate. I always enjoy your comments. Hugs and smiles! Take care.

      Bless You,
      Sandy

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