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Sightless Heart

Blindness overcame me

as I continued my climb,

my wife told me I was shrinking

but I was amongst the clouds!

 

I blackmailed, I bullied,

I murdered, I climbed.

No longer able to tell passion from love;

no longer able to tell hot from cold.

Her icy dagger devoured my heart,
and I tumbled from the crest of the mountain.

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#4: Help came in underwear stains

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  • penman gold member
    September 14, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • maralisa silver member
    September 11, 2008
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    a great take on the promt good luck in the contest