I breathe you in and hold you close
inside my sleeping silent heart,
delighting in the gentle quiet
that comes each time when you depart.
Oh just to hold the very breath
that you impart upon my skin,
to treasure every magic thought
that leaves me slowly breathing in.
A contest entry
- Breathe........A Morning Quickie (48 hrs) by poet2angels.
550 points, ended September 14, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is beautiful!
Great rhyme and flow and lovely, romantic thoughts!
TY for enntering such a beautiful piece
Lynda
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This is a very sensual and personal moment captured so well within two short stanzas. I think any one who has been in love will remember such moments as this when the world stops and a few seconds feel like they should last a lifetime. Simply beautiful
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GOOD GOOD
IT IS WAY TO DEEP
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