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Thoughts

Is this what it feels like to be young?

Stress
Anger
Fear
Worry

Where is the love?
Where are those feelings my parents described?

All I have
Is stress
Is anger
Is fear
Is worry

Do this and that!
Do all or nothing!
Please!
Thank you!
Now!
I need you!
Really?

Will I do?
Am I boring?
Can I do this?
Will it be alright?

Fine
Perfect
Dandy
Really?

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  • Eusebius
    September 16, 2008

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    Much truth, here, succinctly and most poignantly pen stuff.... not so unusually to have these feelings, though they are no fun... bravo...


  • EmeraldOblivion
    September 10, 2008

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    Today in school we had a presentation from the Guidance offices, telling us we could go and see them with all our problems, they were there to help, etc. And I was wondering if one did go to talk to the guidance peoples, what would they say? There is so much to say and so much to not say. So much to feel and so much to ignore. You've captured all of that beautifully in these words. Really magnificent.