In every perfection you'll find a flaw.
Only half of the point is shown,
but I find that beauty and pointless perfection
are never the same on their own,
As a flower whose petals have character and grace
built from the floods and the attempt to give chase,
Who'll always stay with you ,and yet can stand on her own
but will not describe you as worthless and groan
when you call her and ask for her time
just to spend yours holding her mind,
and her heart close to yours
and forget about place
cause the only thing that matters is...
shes inches from your face.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by MessedupMarionette.
700 points, ended October 10, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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talented
you have a way with words and you worded this poem excellently -
WOW, i enjoyed the flow of this one. Cant believe the talent in this contest. awesome job and good luck
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this is really sweet. It seems like it reads kind of awkwardly, however. I think maybe because of the rhyming... I'm not sure though. thanks for entering!
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Unconditional Love
Of your friendship - I'm jealous - a blessing to have someone to share the intimacies of life.
Good Luck in the contest
Tang
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