We march
upon a sea of gladness
other have tried to do this
and failed.
However, we came,
we saw,
we conquered
marching merrily on our way onward.
Author notes
okay so it's silly and stupid. But what can I say at least I tried. Not very good at this kind of thing.
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- JoAn Greinert - Intuitive Artist - Works of Art - Multiple Prompts Contest by Kazytc.
2400 points, ended September 17, 2008, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Woweeee!
This is curious ... reading these words and these in particular...
However, we came,
we saw,
we conquered
marching merrily on our way onward.
Are so familiar,
we saw,
we conquered
Those in particular, I am sure I have read these before, Geeze this is uncanny, and I cannot for the life of me think where either! Its like echoes of a time past coming back in a haunting way! You must be psychic!
Love this beautiful poem in its profoundness and yet simplicity to say so much in so few very cleverly penned chosen and conveyed words and with power and believe so strong and impactual to a masterly level of knowningness from within and without.
Bravo, its lovely well done love it please ..never stop writing!
Thanks Millions for entering it was an honour to have you in
our contest.
Please come back and enter my future contests ok!
Poetic Hugs & Thanks Millions!
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Good description on painting!
Good description on painting! Thank you
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well this is really a great poem, I really enjoyed this read, tis not silly or stupid, great job, John
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thank you for the vote of confidance. I really didn't think it very good. Funny tho. Just not a type of poem that I really have written before.
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Wonderful
Another thoughtful and well expressed creation. Thank you for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you for the kind words on my little poem. I am glad that you liked it.
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You don't need to put yourself down my dear. Poetry is something we do in our own way. Its not stupid or silly but a lovely poem in which you took a good take from the picture.
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thanks for the vote of confidance on my poem.
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