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Today

He told me
to wear my
hair down today.
I didn't know
what that meant.
He told me
it will be
alright today.
I didn't want
to believe him.
He told me
something
I couldn't express
not with his
voice
but with his
eyes.
Or maybe he
didn't say anything
today
and I just
wish that
he did.

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  • Salt Therapy
    September 10, 2008
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    This is amazing!!!!

    He told me
    something
    I couldn't express
    not with his
    voice
    but with his
    eyes.
    Or maybe he
    didn't say anything
    today
    and I just
    wish that
    he did.


    That right there is beyond incredible. I really REALLY loved this piece. Never stop writing you are brilliant.

    ~ Kerrium *hugs*