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bibi's biscuits.

bibi's bitter
because beth's buttered batter
bakes better biscuits.

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Say it five times real fast
Written January 20th, 2004

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  • JM Kenyon silver member
    December 24, 2007

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    I love the humorous quality of this. You can note in many limericks and nursery rhymes that alliteration goes a long way to create a humors or confusing, non-sensical quality to a poem. s and best wishes always... ~Gen~


  • also called
    December 20, 2007

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    every other I could keep up, I'll send you something

    hello slight tongue twister

    I personally liked the first line more prominently than the title because the cuit of biscuits cut in too much without something to catch it ha-ha; but 'bibi's bitter' perks me to pay attention softer.

    The 2nd line held the challenge of your author notes lol, yet the competition asked to not be too engrossed in just crossing lettering. However it hadn't negated leading to the enjoyed tone of the last line.

    no exigency as slack just my gloss over things hee-hee,
    also called


  • Touchof1der silver member
    June 26, 2004
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    Five times huh??? I had enough trouble with one! I love these. I haven't read one of these in a very long time. You are my first since being on Allpoetry. Woo Hoo!! It was great! Thanks for the plesasure and the privilege!

  • allaplgs
    June 25, 2004
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    lol that was really good.

    yep. what else is there to day?

    Um, bravo.

    good job.


  • Sherry gold member
    January 20, 2004
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    Good one Gramps your brillant at these keep them coming
    Hugs,Sherry


  • Thathom
    January 20, 2004
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    Hehe, very nice and indeed it twists my tongue.
    Structure too, very impressive

    You might like my tongue twister called Wonderful Withering World

  • FallingTears
    January 20, 2004
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    lol This is awesome. I love tongue twisters! This one is a hard one to say though. But I like it. It makes sense in a weird way. But that's good haha It's great


  • Naughtygrlred
    January 20, 2004
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    that was a hard one lol more more these are great


    naughty

  • skinwalker 2
    January 20, 2004
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    a twisted mind is mine ~lol ~

    Raf Thanks Bill~ A great job and something that made my day a little more dazzling ..Oh I could only say Beth's buttered better bakes bitter bisk`quick's after three times ~too much for my twisted mind ~ more coffee ~ lol Thanks for sharing ~ Skinwalker

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