seasons come and seasons go, sun upholds its heavenly glow
botanical beauty fills the earth, a sole flower finds its worth
never chained yet never free, life's pay is fairly sweet
seasons come and seasons go, snow overthrows a lifetime of growth
birds take off to the west, heavenly wings permanently blessed
a flower yields before its own demise, spring nor summer answer its cries
ends come yet beginning seems clear, imagination colored by fear
time upholds its fatal hand, dust and ashes retake their stand
paths lead to so many ways, could only say 'I remember the days'
all that remains is dance in life's shower
and maintain the inner beauty of its flower
Author notes
I wrote this yesterday and finished it today,
I know I haven't written anything lately,
hope that the writing block ends with this
tell me what you think 
Please tell me what you think
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i love most of it honestly. god i feel so picky about poetry lately! :] i love the first two stanzas. they are unbelievable. but the last two were awkward in my opinion. like NinetyNemo said its a whole new style coming from you! and im totally into it.
but anyways this has a really great message.
amazing as usual.
taylor.
p.s. writers block is the worst!!
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WB BRO!!
I just turned on my pc after a couple of weeks being offline and the first thing I read is one of my favorite writers back in action
It's a whole new style, and I like it.. keep it coming mate.. cya soon!
PS. kheb raki meegebracht... feeeeesjuuuuh
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Thnx mate
I like,
een vrijdag komk daar wel is van proeve
vant weekend geen pukema, kmoet na kortrijk vo sofie hare verjaardag. Ma een vrijdag benk nog in boom
Grtzzzz
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agreed with lunatyx, you're back ^^
i'm used to you writing about something simple, only to uncover its dark twist
nicely written, great choice of words, but somteimes the rhythm doesn't work out anyways, a good write, and glad to see your writer's block has come to an end.
Grtz, Flater
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There's Phaeton again !!
I loved it bro !
It's great, not just the words or the scheme, no - the entire poem is proof of the fact that your writers block is over
Keep it coming
greetz
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thnx mate
hope you are right...
grtzzz
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JUst Lovely!!!!!!
I love this piece you have penned on nature yet it can extend to many other topics in this life...I love the rhyme sceam....Your imagery was brilliant and colorful and lead the reader all the way through this lovely piece...It left me with a feeling of peace and serenity!!! Thanks for sharing and it looks like the writers block is over this is just marvelous!!!~~Toni~~
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thnx for your comment.
Hope with my that my writer's block ends with this.
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