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The leaves are changing overnight…-

 

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The leaves are changing overnight,

From greens to yellow, brown and red,

Soft whirling winds wish to invite,

Those days of snow and ice I dread.

 

Small birds are forming while in flight,

Their careless swooping seems surreal,

All soon to leave for warmer light,

For me this has some strong appeal.

 

I look upon the life I've led,

Some good some bad and sometimes sad,

A tear runs down for those now dead,

Then grin at times when just a lad.

 

In war the times I thought were right

More times I knew I would be killed

But here I am as if to spite

Those left, whose lives now unfulfilled.

 

This autumn's timed with me and mine,

So wonder when my cold winds blow,

For nature is by grand design,

I really do not want to know.

 

It seems a shame to leave too soon,

There is so much to understand,

Must organize my thoughts where strewn,

Then pen and ink some thoughts by hand.

 

For after all is said and done

It is your loves you valued most

So I will write while in the sun,

For I too soon will be a ghost.

 

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The leaves are changing overnight...

Wandika  9-10-2008

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  • deercatcher
    October 20, 2008

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    Your loves you value most......
    Too bad you have to take care of all those silly cowas and can't come visit mild wintered LoUiSiAna...

    The little I know about you, I have a new respect for survivor guilt. It swirls, all the possibilites...
    Trying to understand... To give randomness and coincidence a fair chance, but always trying to see the purpose, the pattern. My brother in law/hunting partner lost his wife. She was doomed for 18 years, 22 heart caths, 3 open heart surgeries. diabetic. broke her foot when he asked her to come out to the patio to see the flowers he planted to cheer her up. She never healed and wasn't strong enough or willing to amputate. Its been 3 years and I have tried to jogg him off the notion that if he had done better...
    I desparately want to find the right thing to say to him.

    Cougar- If it kills again, leave the carcass. It will return the next night to feed again. Night vision. Don't go looking till daylight(!) I read of a 170 boone and crocket killed by cat on a Texas game ranch that they used this to kill a cougar. Turns out it was a 47 pound bobcat that made the kill. They caped the buck, and found the cat had gone postal and bit all over the neck/chest. Every bite matched the fang width.


    • Wandika gold member
      October 21, 2008
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      Never know where I might stop by.

      We have heard two bobcat screeching. Did not realize they got that big. I have been using road killed deer to try to catch what-ever. Just not out often enough.
      Busy now with firewood for winter.
      Thanks for reading and commenting.

      Jim


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    We didn't actually get a summer here so saying goodbye to it seems rather odd!
    Lovely poem however with enticing rhyme and flow. I hope that you aren't planning on become a ghost too soon however
    Sue and I both want to thank you for your participation in this contest and the series of challenges we have run. There will be new contests coming, so please watch out for them.
    All the best and thanks again,

    Jeff and Sue


  • Patpowers silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    Ah a good work Jim.

    I am a person that still believes summer is around. I am in my shorts and no shoes Jim even thought the weather is cloudy. Goodness only knows what winter will be like. I wish you well in this contest Jim!Nice style here my friend!

  • Eusebius
    September 10, 2008

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    bravo

    This is a superb and highly lyrical piece and most evocative and nostalgic, indeed! Loved it! bravo... bravo... bravo...


    • Wandika gold member
      September 10, 2008
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      Again my thanks

      I appreciate your help and your criticisms. They are always helpful and appreciated from a talent such as yours.

      Jim

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