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Police Interview

Why look at me like that?
I'm the victim here.
Why must you take his side?
Yes, I hope he felt true fear!
... Why didn't he just let me slice the bread in peace?

Ok, this is now just a bit of fun. This is part of a story I'm writing..... Does it convert to modern poetry?

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  • Life is a Beach gold member
    September 10, 2008
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    Ah...love the surprise ending! Pam


  • Celticpoet silver member
    September 10, 2008

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    Very good!

    Yes..in my humble opinion I think it does!...Questions and Statements make interesting reading...Dan xx


  • drake21
    September 10, 2008
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    I was wondering where it was going at first but when I got to the end it made me laugh.