The air whipped across
my face and said,
'breathe me'
And I did...
deeply.
Invisible life support,
on me,
in me,
around me.
And the air made friends,
with my heartbeat,
and the beat,
learned about Love.
Then the Love
embraced other emotions,
and my entire being,
came to life.
Feeling,
became as simple as,
a deep breath.
Inhale love
Exhale fear
Breathe Breathe
Author notes
"Always remember to slow down in life; live, breathe, and learn; take a look around you whenever you have time and never forget everything and every person that has the least place within your heart.”
~Anais Nin
A contest entry
- Breathe........A Morning Quickie (48 hrs) by poet2angels.
550 points, ended September 14, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sandy, I REALLY like this piece. It differs from other pieces I've read of yours, but has the same "aroma"
The flow is flawless, and the meaning clear as crystal. Not sure how I missed this one before, but I'm happy to have read it now!
Love you tons!!!
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Oh My~
Oy!! The last two lines tug at the Heartstrings Beautiful
What emotion You have evoked also images to stain the Mind~ I am reminded of this song that speaks from the Heart and radiates through the veins-
all the while Inspiring one to *Breathe Again*
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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I hope you know how metaphorical these lines are;
"Invisible life support,
on me,
in me,
around me."
Wonderful, and essential that we learn to take our time, and breathe the breath of life to its fullest.
Congratulations on earning the Emerald Cup!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Wonderful
Very touching and so well crafted. Another beautiful poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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SO GENTLE AND BEAUTIFUL!!!
It is indeed a special feeling when we slow down and take a long look around us and see so much beauty which in turn reaches into our hearts and takes all of the stress and sorrows away.
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very nice
...you do quickie well! LOL I like the message here and the between the lines story of life! Great job as usuall, Bubba
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I love this!
"And the air made friends,
with my heartbeat,
and the beat,
learned about Love."
That is so lovely...Very beautiful and softly said!!!
Lynda
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