Think of me this night
as you're heavily into my thoughts
and deeply embedded in my heart; my soul...
You're all I can feel
you're all I can breathe
all I can taste
all that I need
craving you more
like a thirst I can't quench
Entwine thee my soul to yours
wrap us in love's blinding light
I'll cover you with a blanket of love so pure
you take me higher than I've ever been
loved and protected is how I feel
As fireflies flew between our dialogue
and brushed against our skins
you tell me endlessly your love is real
as we sink deep into the night where our love is complete
You're the inspiration when I feel I can't go on
I smile knowing you're there for me
and I see bits of blue sky in your smile
I find myself tasting raindrops under brittle skies
You make me feel like your treasure so desired
No matter how slight,
everything around us
expands these feelings we share
Our love is beautiful; thank you for loving me...
Author notes
Used option 2
`bits of blue sky in your smile
`tasting raindrops under brittle skies
` as fireflies flew between our dialogue
and brushed against our skins
Phrases are credited to checkmate 
~Heavenly Angel~
Also used these wonderful titles to poems written by Tim (Lionslove); a dearly beloved poet and friend whom is missed profoundly! Rest in peace, Lion!
Titles used:
Entwine Thee My Soul
I'll Cover You
Think Of Me
3. You come to love not by finding the perfect person, but by seeing an imperfect person perfectly
A contest entry
- Proudly Presenting: ROUND 2 (: by Walk-Free.
1500 points, ended October 7, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Options~~ =) by Ti Amo Te Quiero.
360 points, ended October 10, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow. such a powerful piece. it's beautifully written, with grace and strength and so much love. great work
i loved this
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This is so strong and beautiful, many of your phrases are breathtaking in the way you have combined them, they speak of intensity, romance and love. Well done.
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Nice work on this one. I always love your romantic writes. They always are filled with great descriptions and images. Keep them coming and good luck in the contest.
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please credit the phrases to checkmate.
a beautiful poem
you put in the phrases and titles very nicely~
good job
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'Our Love is Beautiful' I`m sure..
but your poem could use some work. Select a stanza and line size, then try to stick to it. You have the makings of a lovely poem but your construction is faulty and stilted. Syllable counts are important for flow and meter.
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How can I ever thank you for writing this wonderful piece for the Lionslove Challange! This is truly beautiful! I love how you combined many of Tim's remarkable titles in a write that is personal to you! This is gorgeous, as is your heart!
Thank you again!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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well done Sis xxx and in such a profound message sent of spoken truth of love embedded deep within the soul. An inspiring write that touches the heart with wonderment and heartfelt passion. well done and many blessings always xxxx
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