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The new experiance

I saw the light
The shadows
Melt into the backdrop
You where there like a ghost
Something just out side my concious

I felt body's move
in an intricate dance
When nothing was moving at all
It was like the world had stopped

It made sense
Every last joke
Or small sob
They all made sense

Those few hours
Like something out of a dream
The world clicked
And I was a child again

Didn't expect to find
A common mind like mine
Didn't expect to find
A friend in the wreckage

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