I have given it all up,
Just to be with you.
Family and friends.
But I was never confused.
I truly love you,
with every beat of my heart.
You have always been there for me,
from the very start.
I have made many sacrifices.
You have made yours too.
I think with out them,
we would have never made it through.
When we moved out of state,
to start our lives brand new.
I knew everything would be ok,
because I was with you.
Now we have our own family.
I've never felt so blessed.
I think with out those sacrifices,
my life would be a mess.
A contest entry
- sacrifices by Carefuldelusion.
850 points, ended November 14, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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this is a nice way to say "I love you" Giving up everything you had, and leaving home, Your comfort zone to be with someone and start a family. There isn't really much I can say about this one. I like the way it was written, With such certianty of the emotion. Thank you so very much for sharing with us.
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Felt this was well written with genuine emotions in there; glad to see you've made a new life for yourself, and are enjoying it
best wishes in teh contest.
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Jen, very nice poem.....i like it, well written, flows nicely...........
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WOW that's a good poem! if you ever stop writing i'll be sad! so don't
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very well written and i like it alot
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