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Bipolar Oblivious

These christian ethics and views
shoved into a bipolar brain
telling everyone white lies
keeping them oblivious to our pain

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How I see myself sometimes in a ryhme with only 20 words

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  • blind ecye dog
    October 7, 2008
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    I like the way this was put together. I am not, however, sure why bipolar was somehow tumbled in there. You have an idea that is universal and tried to put it in a tiny, (Your color?), box. I liked it without the reference. With the reference I am conflicted.
    You are disqualified for the comment accompanying your poem. Sorry. RED


  • Sorath
    September 11, 2008

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    Lol that's CS for ya! It probably is just a load of crap and we're probably all going to hell. Oh well! Great write Josh I'll think on it in the next CS rambling.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 10, 2008

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    Good job. I think you have done very well on this one.
    Bi-polarism make life tougher to deal with. I have seen it first hand.

    Congratulations on a great write.

    Mike