I'm contemplating fratricide
Such sociopaths must go
Prognostications were defied
Stupidity's on show
Computer wrecking bloody blister
Ignoramus installed Vista
Author notes
Form is a sixain in ballad measure
No he didn't I'd never let my brothers near my computers 
Just needed 20 words to stun.
In a list
A contest entry
- Set phrasers to STUN (This is a Contest.) by blind ecye dog.
850 points, ended October 17, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was slightly amusing. Vista is less than that.
Your comment, however disqualifies you. Sorry. Rules you know. -
Poets!
You guys are always rubbing our noses in our own truth.
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VISTA?
Unclean! Unclean!
{runs away screaming, frightening the bunnies as she goes}
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hehe, This flows like DHTML with Flash epaulets for character. I'm sorry the "older" generation is unable to comprehend Vista. I realize it isn't compatible with your typewriter but we must move on.
Love,
Amera♥
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Congratulations. You actually had me laughing out loud. The dogs looked very quizzical. Great job.
Mike
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