all the pieces broken
by endless fights of old
cannot take the token
of love by Love bestowed
.
Author notes
Truth
Art:
Female Head (La Scapigliata), c.1508
Artist: Leonardo da Vinci
In a list
A contest entry
- Love Me Tender In Memories Best Forgotten by jcat.
1100 points, ended September 15, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Blessed are they that mourn, for they shall be comforted.
This is a lovely little verse, and a deep revelation - you had to be there. 
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This reads like a saying from a wise ol' sage!! How wonderfully done!! Thank you for your entry...
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I run out of words when it comes to reviewing you, please know that my heart feels close to you somehow. Good luck in contest
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wow this is outstandingly beautiful good luck in the contest
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Beautiful---So much imagery packed into this tiny poem, it is a very beautiful poem and richly composed! Well done my friend.
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Even with all our human faults and frailties, there is love ingrained within us, however small or bountiful.
A gentle touch of spirituality.
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This has an epigrammatic quality to it and is very well-worded. I like it very much.
Good one,
Bill
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Very artistic and mysterious !!! I am most definetely sold here...
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