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Not weakness

Total being constant,
If I lose, you gain.
My sufferings are not
Because of weakness,
Rather for service to others.

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  • blind ecye dog
    October 17, 2008

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    Service to others is a noble pursuit.
    I think the first two lines are very powerful and insightful to human nature. Very nicely done. RED


  • Venugopal gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    fine sentiments expressed here dear friend

    Because of weakness,
    Rather for service to others.

    I liked these thoughts,
    best wishes