Destiny creeping through my skin.
An oh so soft trickle of dreams drips away from my pores.
The inspiration of life slowly fades away in the haze of hatred that swarms my soul.
Repetitive patterns circle around my mind. Taking bits and pieces with each turn.
A void is created .
A hole desperate to be filled,but through this a light has been made.
A guide in the darkness of repetitive despair.
My soul is reaching to meet it.
Crawling from the depths its laid its head upon .
Slowly climbing to a light that goes nowhere and everywhere all at once.
My head is solid now . Grounded in the lights warmth and security.
The earth calls to me in whispers .
The soul keeps reaching.
Desperate to break free.
Desperate to dance to the winds seductive chant.
The harmony of sounds lift me from the dark .
Breaking ground I am almost there.
The tips of my fingers tickling the soft soil of life.
A wave of intense emotion floods my spirit as each hand embraces the new.
lost dreams once buried race to the surface.
More ground is broken and my soul slips through .
Reaching that ever burning light I am floating away .
I have become the winds seductive chant .
I am the earth that has been broken.
I am the strength that is binding .
I am the light that has been made...
A contest entry
- JoAn Greinert - Intuitive Artist - Works of Art - Multiple Prompts Contest by Kazytc.
2400 points, ended September 17, 2008, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow right in deep!
You have taken us right into the very core of this painting where we have not been before, and brought a new meaning and viewpoint to bear. Lovely take and great on all levels, making a fantastic read. So profound as well, wow what a trip! Bravo, well done, love it!
Thanks Millions for entering it was an honour to have you in our contest.
Please come back and enter my future contests ok!
Poetic Hugs & Thanks Millions!
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Wow!
Wow! You bring such a gift of insight to this painting!! Thank you! Great Job
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Thank you so much for the kind words.Your paintings are truly amazing it was an honor to be apart of such a wonderful contest..
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You are amazing!
Your kind words about my paintings are held dear to me! Thank you so much!
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I like this very nice!
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