Blinded by fear
mind in total panic,
running from the darkness
a useless pursuit.
Talons of intimidation
comprehend my anguish,
this phobia of life
haunts with forebodings of domination.
Shadows of Reaper taunt,
must stay ahead
keeping final doom...
suspended.
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Credit the artist
http://dholl.deviantart.com/art/The-Dread-Domain-96173276
(40 words)
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A contest entry
- Quickie Dark Prompt. by Sweet Impatience.
750 points, ended September 18, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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you did an outstanding job with this poem. excellent job with the prompt. I particularly liked the last 4 lines
good luck in the contest
kat
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Just incredible!!! I love that you actually took this outside the obvious and penned perfection! Wonderful job and thank you for your entry
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Thank you for that wonderful comment and applause
I am so pleased you liked it
Gaylene
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wow what a picture.
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Love this, I think everyone wants to keep the final cutain from falling. Very good take, good luck
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