The darkness is so deep,
In a city without sleep.
Rose breeze inflames the night,
And the lights are shining bright.
I shiver, it's so cold,
And your warm hand I now hold,
And your arms do hold me tight,
As our passion pulses bright.
The darkness is so deep,
In a city without sleep,
Rose breeze inflames the night,
And the lights are shining bright.
As we huddle in Times Square,
I know nothing can compare
To you, my boy, my love,
Joyful angels sing above.
A contest entry
- Prewrite-palooza by swim.x.
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Thank you for your beautifully expressed entry, Josie
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My pleasure!
Thanks for holding such a wonderful contest.
Have a lovely day!
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Thankyou Grandma
I got my inspiration from the song "Hey there Delilah" by the Plain White Tees, I'm not sure you've heard of it, but it is a beautiful song. thanks for your beautiful, kind words
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Yes! A romantic poem...with repetitious lines to give more impact....Lovely rhyming and flow....You have the talent hon...Keep penning!
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Thanks Striders Bar
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Excellent
A fine write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
Thank you again Ylova for your sweet and thoughtful words so very nice of you, thanks a million, you've brightened my day
Chin up,
Katie
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This was very lovely. I love the rhymes! Thank you sharing and keep up the good work.
Much love
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Thanks Sandy, that's very kind of you
Chin up,
Katie
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Lovely Poetry
I really enjoyed reading this. Sounds wonderful when read aloud. Beautiful write. You take care. Sandy
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This is so simple yet so complex. It was beautiful. Nice use of repetition. It really made the point of your poem hit home. Great write.
Congratulations.
Good luck in the contest.
Chin up,
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thankyou
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o m g f.
beautiful. amazing
i loved it, not more i can say
xxx!!
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