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Cost My Life

Again I run away from you,
Your steps so big, what to do?

What will happen if I give in,
and stop this fight again in sin?

Have I harmed you, caused you strife,
caused you suffering, cost my life?

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    the rhyme and the word flow in this poem are excellent.
    the emotions are also very well expressed in this poem

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 10, 2008
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    Neat rhyme here, rich in emotions. Great take, good luck