A cartoon isn’t real,
even though it looks surreal,
death is not a drawing,
it’s hurtful and its gnawing.
Look behind you now,
your death I will endow,
this is not a dream,
let me hear me you scream..
Author notes
Credit -
http://dholl.deviantart.com/art/The-Dread-Domain-96173276
A contest entry
- Quickie Dark Prompt. by Sweet Impatience.
750 points, ended September 18, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I think that I would be screaming so loud that they would leave me alone just to not have to hear it anymore!!! A very creative take on the picture!! Thank you for your entry


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Love the dark air this has surrounding it, very neat take on the picture. All the best in the contest


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Nicely and very darkly done. You have put together a poem that is both short and terrible. Best of luck in the contest.






