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Name-less

Don't hold back,
tell me your dreams,
your fears.
Tell me about all of you,
Your thoughts, feelings,
emotions...
I wanna know it all -
I wanna know .. you.

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  • the-hurricane-girl
    8 hours ago
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    <3

    awesome piece,
    love the way you zoomed in on the concept
    You made it really powerful
    and aptly titled .. rocks, makes it mysterious
    Nice poem
    xxx


  • TwiztidMaggot
    July 9

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    hm, idk of a name for this one.... but it is very good, short but says a WHOLE lot. keep up your amazing work!

    TwiztidMaggot


  • Beauty Of Silence
    December 17, 2008

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    hmm, short, simple and pretty intense. and the tittle's perfect the way it is i really liek this poem, and the meaning behind your words. great write, keep penning


  • CharcoalScreams
    September 11, 2008
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    Thanks hunnie. I'll leave it then =)
    I love you x


  • first forgotten
    September 10, 2008

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    i like the title as it is. this poem describes someone you want to know. which means you don't know them, they have no identity through your eyes. this person is nameless.

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