We have each other for healing,
for that's all it is
~It's never whole again.
A contest entry
- Set phrasers to STUN (This is a Contest.) by blind ecye dog.
850 points, ended October 17, 2008, 24 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WoW Sis, I clearly see why this won GOLD ~~~
Your words are few, and packed with tons of meaning.
It really hits the heart. You said all that was needed to be said, as sad as it maybe, your words are as beautiful as you are.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Love Ya, Sis
Joyce
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Well deserved gold. This statement is so very true and for that all the more sad.
Garrison
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very powerful.. hm, really something to think about...
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HI
Short yet so powerfully writen,great work
KEVIN -
I like that you didn't try to cram in a few unneeded words even though you could have. Good decision.
Isn't this the way it is after that first real love is lost? No matter how the loss came about there is always the site of the excision to heal.
Great voice and speaker. RED -
Some things can never truely be made whole again can they! This is very striking and powerful!
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honestly, this is like someone punched me in the stomach, making my eyes open to the brutal truth of life and leaving its ache every time i touch its bruise. yet you have your soft way of landing that blow, but it still hurts.
this should take gold, in my opinion.
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