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Feelings of identity

Absolute bonds of harmony
never become extinct,
they abide painting infinite
infusions within,
twining the inner self with
impulses of life,
spiraling in and out playing
heartstrings like a harp,
marking occasions that we
wish would dissolve eternally.

Author notes

"True love does not fade so easily but lingers deep within the cortex of the soul, rearing its head with memories that are best forgotten at times" credit Jcat

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  • jcat gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    A very beautiful entry!!! Love those last 2 lines, they sum up the saying perfectly! Thank you for your entry. ( the credit for the saying goes to jcat though )


  • sassylilpoet silver member
    September 11, 2008

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    so few words, yet full of metaphoric images that capture the prompt perfectly, wonderful penning.

    Blessings,
    Sassy


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    September 11, 2008
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    A profound message within this compact, well written composition!
    Very Well Done!


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 11, 2008

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    Such a creative write
    Each line beautiful delicate
    my favorite lines are
    wining the inner self with
    impulses of life,
    spiraling in and out playing
    heartstrings like a harp,

    Good luck my friend
    Julie