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Economic collapse

Because of the governments
calculations ,their contact
with true reality is a mere
snippet, which banes ordinary
folk to struggle a crushing
burden, on their shopping lists,
for the price of the toast
and marmalade has shot up by
sixty percent in a few months
when will they  realize the
vastness of these prices and
stop the collisions.

Author notes

sorry the best I could do today promt1. A slice of reason on calamity's cereal.

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  • Arkbear gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    Oh.....soooo very true.......do they have a different calculator than we do?

     

    Good job....God bless you!

     

    Bear ~


  • penman gold member
    September 14, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • MichaelBe
    September 11, 2008

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    Greatly penned and you speak the truth!
    Very nice work and gud look in the contest,

    Michael


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    September 11, 2008
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    Well Said and I agree with you completely!!
    Well Done and an eye-opening read!


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 11, 2008

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    I wish I could taste the marmalade ! or even a pot of jam!
    Bread so vital upon our staple diet rises in dough !
    How true I feel the same hun
    Best wishes in the contest

    Julie

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