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lost

I am...

indefinately

lost within
captive memories

that hold me
in your embrace

you are...
gone

I still taste you

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  • blind ecye dog
    October 17, 2008

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    Very well stated expression of self-imposed loneliness. The words are well chosen and arranged.
    The use of the ellipses is a little confusing. I was unsure if something was left out or were they meant as a pause.
    Anyway a very good write. RED