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speechless

i hear breathing
and a tingling shot of wind
the earth feels like it's shaking
and everything begins to spin

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  • Yemassee gold member
    September 11

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    It's kind of like a defining moment. Maybe not quite an epiphany but one that takes the wind out of you and leaves you reeling. It's an interesting poem. It was an interesting poem.

  • blind ecye dog
    October 7, 2008
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    Very introspective I think. Nice.