I'll be the first
to slake my thirst.
Frothy glass of beer,
now empty, is near.
A contest entry
- Set phrasers to STUN (This is a Contest.) by blind ecye dog.
850 points, ended October 17, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hey! That's really good! I like how you've put so much information into such a short poem. It's very well written!
Great Job and Keep Writing!
-Crystal
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Thank you very much. I am glad that you enjoyed the poem. It is always a challenge to write something that rhymes and is relevant in very few words.
Mike
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Okay but far from stunning. REED
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Thanks.
Mike
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Another funny one! Three cheers for beers!
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Thanks. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Oh I hear you
Kicking back and chugging amug of brew
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This is not something that I do often. As a matter of fact a while ago I bought a six pack of Michelob and found, to my great dismay, they are flavoring beer with fruit. It was flavored with pomergranate and raspberry. It is as terrible as it sounds.
Mike
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hehe another awesome write by an awesome poet. such a wonderful read...... thank for sharing this and good luck in contest......!
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Thanks alot. It was a short quick one. Just before my muse died.
Mike
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Great Write!!
Hello, A fun read this morning. You have said it well with a few words. Something I find hard to do so my hats off to you. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
Sandy
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Thanks. I am glad you enjoyed it. I had a burst of inspiration. Then my muse died, or went on a bender.
Mike
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and it does appear
you need to fear
your thirst again,
you poor poor dear
I love this my crazy friend
Funny, sweet, and charming, a combination you've mastered quite well. I've entered, but am stuck.
I should have known I should run and hide when I saw the word limit
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word limits are not my friend.
Best wishes,
always,
jin
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Thank you for your response. It is always good to hear from you. I hate word limits usually but my muse wanted overtime work, so I did two quick ones last night.
Can't wait to read yours.
Mike
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