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Certainty of the End

Inevitable march towards death
Unavoidable appointment with
the Grim One,
sickle of death in hand,
riding forth for the harvest.

Laughter today, tears tomorrow,
no time for goodbyes.
Is it a march towards oblivion?
What awaits us at the other side,
light or darkness? Or nothing?

Running away from certainty
towards uncertainty
thinking if I could just do one more thing,
if I could hold on a little longer,
perhaps my fears will go away.

Waking up to reality
this was not a dream
but my own final nightmare
come to life
the seeds of waste I have sown, come home to roost.

In my final moments
what thoughts will flash before me?
What will I think of?
Those that I have loved or
those that I have betrayed?

Plans made, results hoped for,
never will come to fruition.
The Grim One knows no friend nor foe,
we are all the same to him,
overgrowth to be cropped, sheared and cast away.


Author notes

username: stani

Artist-- Dholl http://dholl.deviantart.com/art/The-Dread-Domain-96173276.

Much as I tried, I could not do this in 40 words.

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  • jcat gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    You did an excellent job bringing forth the darkness of the Grim Reaper!! Very well done and thank you for your awesome entry


  • januaryrain gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    wow excellent write, excellent take on the prompt.
    Good luck in the contest and keep up the great writes.

  • Mad-pig-dementia
    September 11, 2008
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    excellent work i like this write i felt it
    lost echos of self
    sang in between your lines


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 10, 2008

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    Very nice write, love how you put the ending, nice take on it. Good luck in the contest


    • stani
      September 10, 2008
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      Thank you for the comment, greatly appreciated.

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