Death was once a little boy
the reaper should beware
Destroying all on hell and earth
without a single care
Touching the lads so filled with hate
as they walk alone
Filling them with torturous pain
returning flesh to bone
Author notes
http://dholl.deviantart.com/art/The-Dread-Domain-96173276
A contest entry
- Quickie Dark Prompt. by Sweet Impatience.
750 points, ended September 18, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Boys do tend to destroy everything in their path!!!
Love the darkness of the imagery here!! Very well done and thank you for your awesome entry
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Good job. it all makes sense in the writing.
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Great take on the prompt. The darkness of your imagery is just right for the photo. Good Luck! and God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Oooh nice and dark, love the imagery this portrayed. Awesome take on the picture. Good luck
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