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Iniquity

fingertips...
cut beneath the surface

defiling...
everything deep within me

hatred...
spat from cold digits

lies...
escaped your blackened lips

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  • Cannonsfire
    September 9, 2008

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    'spat from cold digits' yes those claws seem like ice, a very dark and deep write here. Thank you for the entry. C