So just what do you think you are doing,
trying to make me live with your crap.
I told you once before, I wasn't taking that,
and I sure as Hell, meant it!
Who do you think you are,
King Arthur ?
You sure as hell, don't rule me,
you loud-mouthed jerk and phony.
You need someone to step on your head,
cause you're a twisted twirp.
What do you want from me anyway,
just someone to give you a roll in the hay?
Well don't be expecting anything from me,
cause all you've given to me,
is a world filled with torment,misery,and shit!
Maybe you need some of yours to hit the fan!
And you call yourself a Man!
What kind,a Gladiator,
or a Knight',of the Round Table,
for your own abuse to use,whenever you are able!
If you can dish it out,
then you sure as hell should be able,
to take it back, with full clout, from me.
I've lived with yours' long enough.
In fact, it seems like an Eternity.
maybe it is time, for you to leave,
you worthless, good for nothing.
Just get the Hell,out of my Life!
You've already ruined a major part of it,
and you are so full of lies, and bull-shit!
You can't even look me, in the eyes,
and tell me the truth,anymore, you bitch!
How does it feel, to be called one of those,
especially when you are not,
but because of you, I have learned how to be one,
so you had best, just, stay out of my path,
you big old piece of crap!!
You've called me names, played your games,
hit me, with all of your mental-abuse.
Me, you have used, once too often,
and so it's definitely,time to lose you!
You thought you were so cool,
always smarting off,and yelling at me.
Well, now (your) tables have turned,
and you will be, the one who gets burned!!
Good-Riddance-Retard!
Take It Like A Man,
You Bastard!
A contest entry
- Pulse of the Wasteland by Crowknows.
1200 points, ended September 25, 2008, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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My God, seems you are much like me...with faith but some bitterness too? Excellent write, I have this kind of anger! Hard to explain, how to juggle both - but it happens, anyway.
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THANK YOU CROWKNOWS
SO GLAD U LIKE IT..IT'S EXACTLY WHAT I WS FEELING, SO I ENTERED IT..I USUALLY STAY WITH THE LIGHTER SIDE OF LIFE, BUT I FELT THIS ONE, JUST "HAD TO COME OUT"! -
Ahh my first entry. First and foremost I loved the passion, the anger the spite, you could feel it like a transparent phantom hanging over the words. Ending really had alot of kick to it. On a down note however it may have been a little choppy on the flow and a bit off topi I was looking for more of a portrait of hell, you have given me a brilliant work,that is basically you screaming at Satan. All the same a solid entry and the best of luck to you in the contest.
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OH SO-- COOL
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