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The Transformation

 

 

 

 

 

I could feel myself transforming

heart felt so cold

evil spirits clawing at me

broke me down and began to mold

 

my innocent young heart

wanting nothing more than a friend

became something more sinister

than I had ever imagined 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Picture Prompt: http://dholl.deviantart.com/art/The-Dread-Domain-96173276
40 Words

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  • jcat gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    I like how you spun the innocent spawing into the devil incarnate!!! Awesomeness here!!! Very well done and thank you for your entry!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 10, 2008

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    Excellent take on the picture, the bit about wanting a friend is quite sad. Awesome read, good luck