Continuesly fighting
to bring you back one day.
If that doesn't work-
It'll drive you away.
Either I'll have you,
or you'll finally be gone.
But the fighting will cease,
and I will get to move on...
Author notes
2.Love is like war: easy to begin but hard to end.
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- Such a Painful Love by Blooming Poet.
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Comments
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got under my skin this...
yes pardon the crude exspression but...
fight it or fuck it .. it's all the same..
dont know why that comes to mind but it does ... any way good write


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That is the beginning of my favorite line in a song by Sublime. Great minds think alike, lol.
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oh how true ... how true ...


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Yeah but the victory is when you can walk away from it and start the rebuilding






