Just looking into your hot
chocolate eyes cannot
satisfy my hunger for you. Lips
of supple strawberry red bend
to a budding nipple and all
notion of thought evaporates
Painted skin matches mine; satin
smooth caresses my thighs,
shivering against your numbing
fire. Tasting the salt up
from your hips we
braid ourselves together
admist rumpled raw silk as
I feel you lose yourself in me.
Author notes
Lets face it people - real love and kisses that matter always lead to the beauty of this.
And for the record painted skin does NOT mean anything racial. See if you can figure it out 
A contest entry
- ONE KISS LED TO SOMETHING WONDERFUL by Swan song.
450 points, ended September 20, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow the tempetture just went up and i cant spel anymore This was Hot!!!!!
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Painted skin as in tattoos? A man with chocolate eyes, lush lips, and tattoos. I think I know who this was mused about
This piece was a lot different from a lot of the erotica written on here. Everybody always feels the need to use words like cock and rod. Come on people, can't we come up with something a bit more poetic? I think this was the perfect example of that. You didn't bluntly state body parts, emotions, the heat, and the action, you wrote about it all lyrically. You gave it pulsing life instead of painting a picture. So kudos to you for taking a "natural subject" and putting a flavored spin on it.
xoxo
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