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Falling

Dead leaves flutter down
A shroud of decaying Spring
wraps around my heart

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Option #2 (E

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    Ooh very lovely haiku
    so much imagery and depth
    in such brevity.

    Great little write you have penned here!

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 9, 2008
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    Lovely Haiku! Good luck in the contest!