I Love you but you never see me,
I need you but you will never need me in the same way,
I suppose this is my debt to pay.
My punishment for liking a girl,
Maybe my guilt is eating me up?
For I am sure I would slip up,
For everything I treasure is taken from me,
Before I have a chance to prove I'm worthy
Either that or I throw it away!
For at the time I don't realise what I have
Though I'm sure if I had you I would be whole.
I know You have been burned,
I don't wish to do that,
I only want to make you happy,
But I fear I would fail
For you deserve more than what I have to give
But without you I cannot live
Tell me what I am to do
I don't want to lose you.
Sorry for being honest.
Author notes
Written at age 19 about someone I knew back then.
'the worst way to miss someone is when they're standing right next to you, and you know you can't have them.'
AP Name- Defiant Justice- although now your contest isn't anonymous...!
It's only more than 20 lines because of spaces, please don't DQ me!
In a list
A contest entry
- I shouldn't love you; But I want to. by splinteroflight..
550 points, ended November 14, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - how many times can i break till i shatter. by innocence jaded.xx.
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What should I call this?
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emo-ish? def not! i think this has lots of good emotion but it doesnt sound emo-ish. just sounds like another girl that has another problem like so many others when the one you love, never loves you. and that makes this poem lovely, you wrote about it, you didnt moan about it. nice write x
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wow
just fxcking wow!
this is so amazingly incredible, i don't know where to begin!
i really don't.
the feeling of standing next to someone you loveso much and knowing you can't have them is the worst in the world.
well doneon a great piece and good luck!
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aawwww sooo sweet, love the emotion in this :-) that person is very lucky for that love you have for them, .....
name= Never seeing me!
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i wrote it ages ago when i was a bit more emo than now ha ha
name=never seeing me, not quite understanding what your refering to
anyway ill log on soon see ya!
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Unrequited.
But I do love you, Bex,....
Don't doubt it!
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