Energy is the very being of all mankind.
It is the power within and the vibration without.
Such is Woman who brings forth new life
For she pacifies the infant
Calms the emotions of man
and prepares the banquet of tranquility
Fire is in her soul
She is the creator of the spirit of man
The trusted cocoon of the new life
The mother of the saviour
The half that makes up the whole
Without her there would only be
a portion of existence
Bringing forth the fire,
she glows
flames of passion from glowing loins
Wisdom deep within, under estimated,
often overlooked
She is Love
Never underestimate her power
She will fool you with her
innocent smile
Never take her forgranted
Your foolishness will be your demise
For within a woman is an energy
Only the universe understands
For she knows how to plug in the power
to tune into the frequency
To shock you into submission
Author notes
Option 18 feminine energy
A contest entry
- JoAn Greinert - Intuitive Artist - Works of Art - Multiple Prompts Contest by Kazytc.
2400 points, ended September 17, 2008, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Fabulous work!
Fabulous work and presentation here Janice, your sentiments and words together with the poetic graphics well brought to life this painting which hangs on my walls at home and now I shall look at it and think of your wonderful words here, thank you for animating this wonderful painting I am so proud to own.
Its as if you read the minds of us who own it and view it daily, it is so spot on in all you say, which is curious, you really must be a true and genuine psychic.
I am stunned at how you have captured the essence so well.
Loved this bit..
For within a woman is an energy
Only the universe understands
For she knows how to plug in the power
to tune into the frequency
To shock you into submission
Wow that is just sooo true ..us women are crafty souls at times!
Well done this is fabulous most enjoyable and exciting read and so well penned with perfect rhyme and flow too. Love the animated background its firey feeling adds even more weight to the poem. Love it, bravo!
Thanks Millions for entering it was an honour to have you in our contest.
Please come back and enter my future contests ok!
Poetic Hugs & Thanks Millions!
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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You had my attention to the end!
You had my attention to the end! Great Job! Thank you so much.
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Wow! This is stunning and a wonderful depiction of the picture prompt. You have described us women very well here and I like this a lot! Great job on this and I wish you all the best in this very cool contest! Blessings, Patty
PS..I especially love the last stanza!
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